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What would you do if I left today and never returned?
What would you think if I died?
What would you do if I said I wanted to end it all?
What would you say if I tried?

What would you do if I held your hand?
What would you think if I cried?
What would you do if I said I wanted to be with you?
What would you say if I lied?

What would you do if I told you I loved you?
What would you think if I said you're all I think about?
What would you do if I truly cared about you?
What would you say if I told you I love you?
Would that be ok?
©2005-2009 ~daeken
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Yes, it's overly repetitive, and sounds like Dr. Suess made a trip to tijuanna, but that's ok... if you don't like it, don't read it. (I know I don't...)

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aww its so sad in a way but I can defintely tell it comes from your heart and how you feel. btw, better then anything I've written latley.

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"My dream is hear rocks hitting my window and see you standing in the rain"
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sad

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-Being in a band is like a marriage without sex. The only lubrication you have is music and the music has to be good.
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What would you do if I left today and never returned?--IT WOULD HURT ME BEYOND UNDERSTANDING
What would you think if I died?--I WOULD DIE WITH YOU
What would you do if I said I wanted to end it all?--I WOULD CRY MY EYES OUT
What would you say if I tried?--I WOULD COMFORT U THROUGH IT

What would you do if I held your hand?--SMILE
What would you think if I cried?--CRY WITH YOU
What would you do if I said I wanted to be with you?--I WOULD SAY I FELT THE SAME WAY
What would you say if I lied?--I WOULD UNDERSTAND

What would you do if I told you I loved you?--I WOULD SAY I LOVE U TOO
What would you think if I said you're all I think about?--I WOULD TELL YOU YOURE ALL I THINK ABOUT ALSO
What would you do if I truly cared about you?--I WOULD WONDER WHY
What would you say if I told you I love you?--I WOULD SAY I KNOW HOW U FEEL
Would that be ok?--IT WOULD BE WONDERFUL

that was a spectacular poem cody, i miss you. xoxox

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Pull Your Halo Down Around your neck and tug off your cloud
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:hug: I miss you a lot :(

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